First draft review

This is the first draft of our film. We have received much feedback from it and know what we want to do to improve.

My initial review is that it follows the storyboard to much making it feel too short and it feels like it is jumping around which can make it confusing. Also I feel that the music is to loud and heavy to fit a thriller however I feel that keeping it greyscale helps to create tension and helps suggest that this is a flashback.